Big4's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SMB3 Outtakes]

One of the better outtake spoofs

Fast paced, running gags, humorous randomness: well done.

[Random shorts 7]

Impressive, but familiar

Animation style's very refined, but isn't that soundtrack Animaniacs's Wakko Warner belching the Blue Danube?

Alvin-Earthworm responds:

Yup. I heard the song ages ago and I wanted to make a Flash animation to it. XD

[Blobbles- ep. 2]

2/4 is my favorite; excellent new series

Hilarious without the use of vulgarity, toilet humor, or ultraviolence? I salute you, Blobbles!

JonBro responds:

Uh, thanks... I don't like vulgarity or toilet humor anyways. Ultraviolence is okay-no, awesome, I just don't get around to animating it.

Thanks!

[Fast n' Quik Thxgvng mvie]

Worth a Proc.

The animation is sub-par, but the humor isn't. Blueberry bread, LOL.

[Farewell to You Revised]

Almost got it

Your animation needs a serious overhaul. It's choppy and unnatural, so work on that. The best advice I can give you is to get yourself some professional help, and I don't mean for the Flash.

S-M-films responds:

lol you could have left it at flash advice since i said at the start it has nothing to do with me. Oh and i liked ur movie nipple grunt or sumtin

[Johnnie: The Demon Clam]

Not funny "Ha ha"

What's the punchline? If it was the wine, it wasn't that funny. Maybe if you didn't digress with those two fish, the Flash would be more effective. Remember, shorts are concise and to the point: don't get distracted.

[The New Guy]

Frickin' beautiful, man!

Attractive, fluid animation, appropriate music, and an an absolutely hilarious story.... I'm in stitches.

[Love me Love me not]

Classic storytelling and absurdly cute

Your character models are so precious, and the story has a good moral to it. Your animation, however, leaves something to be desired. GJ, otherwise.

[Kaiblade The trailer]

Nice, but needs some work

You're off to a good start. The trailer's pace is aggravatingly slow, though. You might want to up the FPS. And for the love of God, proofread your text or copy it into Word. Spelling and grammar are easier than the actual Flash.

[Rockin' English]

Reminds me of School House Rock

Pretty good. Some people on NG need to learn correct punctuation. BTW, if your clause is integral to the sentence, use commas rather than parenthesis.

Dapenchwr2001 responds:

yep, it is inspired by school house rock. i just forgot to put that on my commentaries.